My Argument

For writing we have been learning to write an argument using the writing process. The topic was “Are Devices Taking Over Our Lives”.

Something I did really well in my writing was my linking of paragraphs and using connectives

Here is a section of my writing that shows this.
iiii = linking paragraphs
iiii = connectives


We had other trends as well.


Secondly 30 years ago people went crazy about new music and sports. It shows that tech wasn't everything back then.